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August 27, 2012
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NIKON CORPORATION
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NIKON D5000
Shutter Speed
10/400 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Aug 27, 2012, 6:10:19 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows

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The feel good vibe by j4d3 The feel good vibe by j4d3
"Feel good, real good,
Now our time, real good time"










...E chi l'avrebbe mai detto :la:
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You wanted me to give this self-portrait a critique by posting it in my thread at the forums.

I browsed you gallery to see what kind of photography you enjoyed to see if this was something that was in your alley, so to say.

For portraits and especially headshots, it's important to be aware of that a persons hand is usually enough to cover half the face. This makes hands a dangerous addition to have in such a closeup shot. That being said, hands can be used to frame the face - which can be a neat effect :)

Personally I would use a healingbrush to remove the think black line to the right of the lefteye. Or I would just dampen the darks there, making it blend more with the shadowside of the nose.

I'm sure you know by now that getting the eyes in focus when doing a selfportrait is next to impossible, but I think you've managed well here - your eyes looks clear enough to compliment the capture.

Overall this is a very good selfportrait, you definately established a great tone and emotion to it. As you can read from the critique there isn't much I'm asking you to change, but rather be aware of the fallpits.

Well done :)

Hope this was helpful =)
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ColubrineDeuce Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Photographer
Great execution!
It is great finding you again, after all these years!
=)
Turns out you can start at the beginning of your favorites. I must have found you in my first day. =)
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login86 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
che bella questa foto!
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Hieronimus-art Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
Lovely ! :)
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nenin20 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
you are a very nice girl :D
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MarcoFiorentini Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Una foto splendida...che sai bene..mi sarebbe tanto piaciuto poterti fare.
Se cambi idea...
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mrmd53 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Fabulous!
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inkedborja Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
carita preciosa
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b13visuals Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful face and photo!
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j4d3 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank u (:
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