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The feel good vibe by j4d3 The feel good vibe by j4d3
"Feel good, real good,
Now our time, real good time"










...E chi l'avrebbe mai detto :la:
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You wanted me to give this self-portrait a critique by posting it in my thread at the forums.

I browsed you gallery to see what kind of photography you enjoyed to see if this was something that was in your alley, so to say.

For portraits and especially headshots, it's important to be aware of that a persons hand is usually enough to cover half the face. This makes hands a dangerous addition to have in such a closeup shot. That being said, hands can be used to frame the face - which can be a neat effect :)

Personally I would use a healingbrush to remove the think black line to the right of the lefteye. Or I would just dampen the darks there, making it blend more with the shadowside of the nose.

I'm sure you know by now that getting the eyes in focus when doing a selfportrait is next to impossible, but I think you've managed well here - your eyes looks clear enough to compliment the capture.

Overall this is a very good selfportrait, you definately established a great tone and emotion to it. As you can read from the critique there isn't much I'm asking you to change, but rather be aware of the fallpits.

Well done :)

Hope this was helpful =)
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:icongasicpozar:
gasicpozar Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
You have happy eyes :) Keep it goin' :D
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:iconcolubrinedeuce:
ColubrineDeuce Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Photographer
Great execution!
It is great finding you again, after all these years!
=)
Turns out you can start at the beginning of your favorites. I must have found you in my first day. =)
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login86 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
che bella questa foto!
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:iconhieronimus-art:
Hieronimus-art Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
Lovely ! :)
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:iconnenin20:
nenin20 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
you are a very nice girl :D
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:iconmarcofiorentini:
MarcoFiorentini Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Una foto splendida...che sai bene..mi sarebbe tanto piaciuto poterti fare.
Se cambi idea...
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:iconmrmd53:
mrmd53 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Fabulous!
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:iconinkedborja:
inkedborja Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
carita preciosa
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:iconb13visuals:
b13visuals Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful face and photo!
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank u (:
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:iconazazello6869:
azazello6869 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
You so cute baby!!!!
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:iconweareone:
Weareone Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Bella!
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:iconbehindxbluexeyes:
behindxbluexeyes Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Che begli occhi! :heart:
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Grazie (:
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:iconbehindxbluexeyes:
behindxbluexeyes Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
di niente :)
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
=)
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:iconestonius:
Estonius Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
So cute and beautiful.
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
(:
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:iconmaffoo:
Maffoo Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
What a fantastic self-portrait - I love it.
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:thanks:
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:iconskotsoad:
skotsoad Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Great shot! Love the eyes!
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:flirty:
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:iconsaliroo:
SaliroO Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
proprio bella :)
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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:iconcarlosae:
CarlosAE Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great photo. I love it! :love:
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
mmmh... I think so, I love it too :rofl:

Thanks ;P
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:iconcarlosae:
CarlosAE Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. =)
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:iconpamba:
Pamba Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Looks very good, you are beautiful :)
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
(:
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:iconmisgaeroten:
Misgaeroten Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Like, like, like
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:dalove:
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:iconmisterrufio:
MisterRufio Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Love the eyes!
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:flirty:
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marilisaargentieri Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
...e chi l'avrebbe mai detto che ti avremmo visto sorridere (di nuovo) in uno scatto...
E SOPRATTUTTO: CHI L'AVREBBE MAI DETTO CHE TI AVREMMO VISTO CON L'AZZURRO VINTAGE!
mi strappi un grande LOL! :icongrin--plz:

--
How happy is the blameless Vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd.
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Fà che sia sazia...
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
In effetti nessuna delle due cose era anche solo lontanamente prevedibile :aww:
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:iconsumgie1:
sumgie1 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
I guess you have it!
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
And I have it ;)
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:iconkitamba:
kitamba Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
:love: so cute
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
(:
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:iconreplichated:
RePliChAtEd Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
jade sei tanta roba ^^
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:hexentanz: Grazie !
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:icongioarturi:
GioArturi Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
Splendida davvero! :w00t: :heart:
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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:iconsmokenmirorjono:
SmokeNmirorJono Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
: D
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
=D
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:iconsmokenmirorjono:
SmokeNmirorJono Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
:)
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:iconnowordforme:
NoWordForMe Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
che occhi belli! chi questa modella?
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:iconj4d3:
j4d3 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Mi stupisce che tu non abbia ancora capito! :B
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